I’m quoting below a small section from my novel, simply
because I had this very experience for real tonight.
'He walked back down the garden path and tried to
apply the light of reason to a situation in which there appeared to be none. He
looked around and realised that things were not as they should be. It was early
August when he’d walked up the hill, but the garden had the look of October
about it. The summer flowers were gone, their heads reduced to dark husks and
their stems drooping into decay. The light seemed eerie in the gathering gloom
of dusk. It had more of lurid luminescence than of honest light about it, and
the garden looked brighter than the deep grey sky could seem to account for. It
was an unwelcome brightness, a wrong, unnatural sort: unwholesome and
disturbing. He began to believe that it was only there to enable him to be
watched.
He looked southward to the river valley, where
the view of trees, fields and hedgerows was washed into a range of depleting
half tones. Nothing moved there; the familiar lights of traffic running along
the road beyond the river were conspicuous by their absence. Neither was there
any other sign of life; the specks of brightness that usually betrayed the
location of the many scattered buildings were absent too. And there was no sign
of moon or stars in the saturated gloom above his head. This was an abandoned
place.
He reached the bottom of the garden and became
aware of one or two small shapes falling around him. They were decaying leaves,
and confirmed that he had somehow woken in an autumnal world. The rain had
stopped but everything dripped mindlessly and mockingly. The still, misty air
felt cool, and the occasional clatter of a dead leaf was the only sound
breaking the mortified silence.'
It’s been a wet day today, and by twilight the low cloud had
descended to shroud the world in a wet mist traditionally associated with an
English November.
The rest of that chapter sees the protagonist menaced by
dark slithery demons until Annie can bring him back to her presence. At least I
was able to go back to the house, close the curtains and make my dinner.
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